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A quick poll...how many ppl here write poetry?
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(25 of 25)
Jul 3, 2008 4:52 PM
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Yeah, I write poetry, and I gotta say Def Poetry is pretty disappointing at times. They always have entertaining people, but the quality of work has been known to be rather questionable. Gotta love Kevin Coval though. http://www.digitalfuntown.com/homepage.php
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(24 of 25)
Jun 22, 2008 12:45 AM
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Yes I write conscious poetry poems from the heart to the heart I have been writing since my 9/11 ordeal to cope with my panic attacks and anxiety attacks check out my site i just launched it this week it is called www.poemsoftrueemotions.com and i won a 2007 editor choice award -- Edited by trueemotions at 06/21/2008 9:45 PM PDT
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(23 of 25)
May 15, 2008 4:08 PM
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Yes I do...I love writing, reading, and listening to poetry! It's the best way to express myself... INDECISIVE AND UNCERTAIN It's getting late and sleep is beckoning me, but I can't succumb at this time, so sleep will have to wait. As I sit here alone, a million thoughts race through my mind and I wanna make them go away, but tranquility of the heart and mind is so hard for me to find. I'm aware of current situations and I know what needs to be said and done... eventhough I have said and done those things, I'm beginning to have doubts about the decisions made. Uncertainty consumes me and indecisiveness traps me where I stand. My eyes fill with tears of sorrow and regret while simultaneously my throat swells with all the words I dare not say and my mind is cluttered with all the memories I can't seem to forget. We have said good-bye many times before, but somehow you have always found your way back to me... Is this time different? Is it finally over and are we finally free? Can you honestly say that you're prepared to live life without me? As I allow these questions to linger in my mind, I'm deep in thought as I ponder their answers... Lacking the knowledge of where we truly stand eats me up inside. Nevertheless I paint a smile on my face every morning and carry on as if I'm not affected when in reality I am... As more tears fall, I fight hard to compose myself and make them stop, but it's no use... As these tears fall, I hope and long for a text message, an email, or a call... Anything to indicate you're feeling half of what I feel... Anything to indicate that everything you said you feel for me is real... As I wait and wait, more tears gradually fall and gradually I realize that I'm waiting for nothing at all... you're never gonna text, email, or call. I don't want you to, but then again maybe I do... I don't wanna be with you, but then again maybe I want that too... I don't wanna see you, but I'm feeling as if I need to... I wanna talk to you, but then again I don't wanna hear what you may say... I'm so indecisive and so uncertain and I hate feeling this way. The only thing certain to me is that I'm still in love with you and only you... I don't wanna love you and I don't wanna be in love with you, but that's something that will never change. My love for you will never die and everyday I ask myself why... Why do I still love you the way I do? The answer to this question is deep within my heart... can't stand the fact that we're so torn apart... I hurt so much inside because I want you in my life... forever by my side. Scratch that...I need you because I've never loved anyone as much as I love you and I know that I may never love anyone as intensely... Everytime I see you I just wanna embrace you close and never let go... Everytime you're close to me I just wanna kiss away all the pain that I caused you. The again I don't want any of those things... maybe I want you to keep your distance and stay far away, but not even disance can make anything between us okay... I'm uncertain about what's best for me, but everyone tell me it's not you... They tell me to leave you alone and that getting back with you is the worst thing I could do... What if they're wrong? Who's to say that you're not meant to be with me?
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(22 of 25)
Apr 22, 2008 9:16 PM
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I love writing poetry and have been writing poetry for over 26 years. Poetry is love of communicating through a great art form. Love By Imagination Let me penetrate your mind with words Of lingo. There?s nothing to see for darkness overwhelms the night. Let?s not give in to the seductive feelings Of lust, so we can let our minds unite in truth in light. Intellectual foreplay creates boundaries of exploration. Without touching or kissing you?ll find a delicate whisper of love within your imagination. Whispers in the dark have meaning of more than love. Commitment is just one of things I think of. I want to make love to you with poetic words that make you climax from what?s been Said. Have you shiver from every syllable spoken. While you lie back in your bed. With our imagination we Can journey to Spain. Make love in different Languages, while we Swing from chandeliers. Sip words of champagne. Swallow lyric of screaming Pleasure. Can you sustain? Because there?s more as we journey to the core with succulent desires as we baptize our souls by fire in the heat of verbal passion dripping with flavor ever lasting. Filling your inner core while your body silently screams for more. Before we take flight and leave the night to bring in a new day. We open our eyes and Sanctify out thoughts with a kiss as we part ways. We needed no explanation. Because we only wanted to Enjoy love by imagination. Copyright © 2008 David Burton -- Edited by techman443 at 04/22/2008 6:17 PM PDT
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(21 of 25)
Apr 15, 2008 3:49 PM
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There are SOO many talented people on this board! -- Angela HBO Forums Host
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(20 of 25)
Mar 18, 2008 11:02 AM
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Her Heart She lays her heart out on the ground Simply Nothing less, nothing more Not seemingly complicated Her heart It?s a little worn Missing a few pieces Tied together in some places Unraveled in others Her heart She looks into your eyes Searching for something You feel what her heart feels All her pain, all her trials Happiness and love Her Heart Whispers of imperfections But it sings of strength and grace She searches for an understanding Acceptance She lay on the ground Her heart in hand
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I try........ Let me know?
Mar 6, 2008 10:07 PM
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Unicorn Heraldry, moral wing span tip to tip across mankind. Once persevered heart, innocence afoot spear of destiny pierced my thoughts. World's purity is lost, death of the unicorn. So This Is The World So, This is the World? Big brother ensconce himself next to me Silence, trust me he knew, Oscillating between fear and bravery I will and could not move, my freedom is on the line? In 1 and 8 before 8 there was 4 I'd prayed the Screens won't talk no more
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Feb 12, 2008 5:20 AM
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If SHIP IS TO MOVIE AS LIGHT IS TO STAR THAN THEIR KNOWLEDGE WILL ALWAYS BE GREATER ELIJAH JOSIAH ALLELE LA LA!I FUR IS FORBIDDEN THEN A SKIRT IS GOOD RIDDANCE! IF SKIN IS SELFISH THAN EXO-skeletal ALL SHELLFISH! ABC's ARG ARG AY 123 CAPTAIN ADMIRALS DAVIDS EYE GOLIATH ROBINSON you ARE IDEAL MODEL NAVY SIRE! SO WHAT OR THIS WANKSTA CALLED 50 IN NEW YORKS SHY RE IN OVERPRICED ATTIRE SHELLFISH MAN OVA SEAS J as Z STOLE DEREON DESTINY HOUSTON PROBLEM DECREE SUSPENSION OF STEED! PIRATES BOOTY SILENCE SHALL BE SHUN and WON TON SOUP is STEW 3 2 1! WITCH IS WHY WISE BLOOD DINES, CHEWS, and SWALLOWS with MOUTHS CLOSED HOLLOW! EVE CAPTIVE SOL RELEASED ME PAST YEARS NIGHT WAS SOLD COLD WITH CANDIED FOOLS GOLD! GARDEN EDEN APPLE IS SKIN TREE IS BARK BASKET WAS FULL TIGGER WAS DARK! BEAR WAS GOLDEN HEIR WAS HOLDEN DESTANIE with IE PLAY HELP PLAY HELP PAIR WE PAIR WE PAIR WE FRANCSWA PLEASE! WALRUS PENGUIN WALRUS PENGUIN PARROT ISLAND ICE BASE LAND IS PLATED TECHNOLOGICAL TITANIUM POLAR BEAR is BEST DON'T YOU SEE PANDA ZEBRAS MAN! THAT of WITCH WE DO NOT SPEAK SALEM LAS VEGAS KEEPS! BOO W HOOT BOO W HOOT WICK SHY SUIT MY SKIN is ALSO BOOT! THAT OF WITCH HE SHE IS MAMMAL BURDENS THIS EARTH ROMANTICALLY SILLY LIKE CON glamorously BRILLIANTLY SWOOPING AND POACHING AT THE TOP of EVERY PEAK STONE AND SETTERS KEEP! ADMITTANCE be DIME and HEAVE SWINE SHINE EVERY TIME BARBEE is TIME! QUESTION is QUOTA I KEEP! SAKE is LAGER WITH LEAK! SEE SEVERAL FOR SHOW SEE ONE FOR BOW. HEAVE HO HEAVE HO TIC TOC TOC TIC TIC ROW ROW ROW THAT CHICK! BOOK NOTE NOTE BOOK KEEP FOOT OFF SPUR no HORSE SHALL EVER be AGAIN CURSED! HOUSE COURT COURT HOUSE 2007 99 OUR TIME FOR SPORTED RAT'S MOUSE MICKEY DANCES WITH MINNE SPOUSE! CHOOSE NOW VOTE WISELY BOSTON TEA PARTY CELTIC PRIDE LEAD! 2008 PRIMARY on the RISE CAVENDER CADAVER CAUCUS ALL SPARK INDEED! BUSH is CHEIF HOW is COMMAND SHAQ ARMY COLE BELIEF! HATES TEXAS HE is FROM SAN TO YOU is OCEAN VIEW SUN! SEA AIR SHIP BETTER so HATE TANK LIKE TYRANT! BLACK BIRD CROWS WORK SCARES MAN is SAND WHAT A JERK FARMERS CAN'T EVEN STAND I'M A TAURUS OF THIS EMERALD LAND! CREOLE CREOLE COON be my BACKSIDE ALEXANDRIA EGYPTIAN JOY RIDE! SSI SSI SS U USS LEX LEX BEST SUPER MAN'S CHEST DAVY JONES CHEST! HEART IS MOST HEAVY LUNGS are QUITE STEADY be HOLD MY FLESH has ALWAYS BEEN READY! SCAN CAT SCAN CAT a DOG ALSO LAY FLAT! EYES CLOSED EARS SHUN D NOSTRILS CLOSE LIKE FULLY WILTED LUNG! ANNIVERSARY BE MINE VALENTINE is MY MOON SHINE MY TOOTH CHOCOLATE SIGN IS CHOKE A LOT WINE MARY WANTS TO DIME THIS BLACK TOOTH MAN AQUINO HAT LESS DOES NOT SHINE, MARY and LYNN ELIZEBETH MONROE BRITTANY JACKSON SNOWFLAKE POODLES me ALAMILLO VILLARREAL PRADO THIS TIME! REMEMBER THE ALAMO NEVER FORGET 911 WORDS ARE JUST NUMBERS TO THEM FOR FUN! PUBLIC RESPECT DEFEATED SANTA ANNA OSAMAS' HIS SON EVIL ROLLED IN ONE!
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Feb 11, 2008 1:59 PM
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I wrote back in school but have not done anything since. I guess I have just one huge writer's block going on. Great poetry here!
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Feb 6, 2008 10:28 PM
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?I would if I could? I say To the woman Wrapped in the colors of life Wrapped in reds that mock sunsets Wrapped in blues that tease seas turned green with envy Wrapped in yellows who sell secrets to the high noon sun Lying in her lap Her dying son is wrapped in the same But his yellow eyes and sunken cheeks Can?t claim comfort in the language of Tribal cloth She holds tight But cannot shed one more tear Dried out rivers of wrinkles Run deep in the rich landscape of her mahogany terrain Sinuous and saturated with more Salt water than most oceans could claim I would if I could I say To the stories Of three year old girls Whose legs were spread and Souls were stolen Animals rode in on camels backs Shotguns in hands Leaving blood trails As their flags But these aren?t stories There are no camp fires Only that set to the shacks of every black African Muslim That tried to run from the government gunmen But what can be done when The first genocide of the twenty first century Doesn?t make for an interesting ?reality TV? Darfur doesn?t sell time slots on NBC And death doesn?t seem to fit the demographics of MTV Bush said ?Not on our watch? But he must have meant ?We?ll see? We all know times zones differ Pontius wipes the fresh blood clean And I sit And I blame the wicked ways Of others I cast my finger in Righteous indignation Your vacant moral complacence Frankly makes me sick So I?m gonna sit right here And switch back and forth between CNN and Laguna Beach I mean, I would If, I could.
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Jan 23, 2008 10:45 PM
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I am waaay late in getting in here. But as they say, better late than never. Yall are REALLY good. I love the poems. I'd love to see more. -- Angela HBO Forums Host
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Dec 25, 2007 4:28 PM
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BRANCHES for my Father-2007 In search of warmth from a sun, behind a cloud on damp winters day. In a season of change. I dream of spring an the flowers it'll bring. In the warmth of new summers sun . As days go by I stare an see this ol' twisted tree. In it I see my life of loves and dreams before me, reaching in winter sky. No leaves, just bare and naked . The frost of winter, glisten of ice, will comfort my eyes. Till flowers bloom in May. -- This free speech message aproved by MATOIA, unless deleted by HBO MODS. -- Edited by MATOIA at 12/26/2007 8:14 AM
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Re: Do you write poetry? Yes
Nov 30, 2007 4:50 PM
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it is most apparent that you are quite aware of the Secret I look forward to reading your book Much Respect, One Love One
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Nov 30, 2007 4:10 PM
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interesting topic jest, devil's advocate or genuine inquisition all pose a ponder thus, you shall find we are writers of poetry poems and song, rap, etc the term writer offers not justice to the prophets of verse in all truth - verse is an inner revelation for the one who expresses as well as the one whom shares in the concept of interpretation no judgment is passed just an expressed thought of aroused interest Much Respect, One Love One -- Edited by ultimprv at 11/30/2007 1:11 PM
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Re: Do you write poetry? Yes
Nov 29, 2007 9:57 PM
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Ain't no shame in my game Passion is my name I write poetry and that's my fame wealth prosperity and success is what I expect and I won't settle for less I dream and think big My mind Is what creates You dig? I believe in myself and my goals Manifesting is part of my soul Copyright 2004-2007 Cassandra Muhammad Author of Poetry With A Passion! *Free Publishing Guide* http://www.trafford.com/robots/04-1918.html http://www.mypowermall.com/biz/home/57297
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