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Magdalena says goodbye, Linc, Jake, Cass, and Emma work out the particulars, Shaun shows Cissy, Butchie and Kai argue, Tina makes a move, Bill and Zippy search for clues, Madame Alabaster adds to her list. Meyer makes a decision, Mitch builds a shrine, Adam finds the key to the bar. Ramon holds a vigil. Dwayne goes missing.
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Re: Episode 15: His Visit: Day Fourteen
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Good feature, we can reply to an archived thread.
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Re: Episode 15: His Visit: Day Fourteen
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Re: Episode 15: His Visit: Day Fourteen
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John: I DON'T dream.
But Tammy, you are at the right place to ask for it, John is somewhere around here.
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Re: Episode 15: His Visit: Day Fourteen
Apr 16, 2008 11:39 PM
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Ponders the thought...
Possibly our writer's experience "John's making of a dream!"
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Living in the present moment with happiness, awe and no worries as the future. The present moment is all we have!
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> I wanted to add my praises to Wax, Back and Sven for
> the the awesome scenes. They were a breath of fresh
> air and inspiring. Thank you for keeping the flame
> alive during a dark and dreary winter. You drew me
> back.
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> Sometimes it only takes a word or two, but you guys
> built a bonfire, and you know how I like a good
> bonfire.
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> Wax- Your musical visions are bad to the
> bone.
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> Back- Bring it on.
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> Sven-I knew you could write it right.
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> You guys have a depth of understanding that allows
> the love of John to burn bright.
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> Share it.
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> Come on
> baby light my fire
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> S
AMEN!!!
Is thrilled to see Sven and Spirit back on the boards!
((HUGS)) and much love to you!
T
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I am here, Spirit, always was, waiting for the story of John to continue. The winter is over, isn't it? The last patch of snow melted in my garden three days ago.
Thank you for your kind words, I don't deserve the praise, my voice is a weak echo in the mountains, just an echo.
I don't believe in coincidences, there is a gentle hand leading us on our way, we can't command the flame, although its sparks we all share, it draws us back to its undying source and brings us all together.
Nothing can make me happier than reading what is written by you, Walkara and Back.
If I can contribute in my small and insignificant way, I shall.
I will need help.
Thank you again.
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I wanted to add my praises to Wax, Back and Sven for the the awesome scenes. They were a breath of fresh air and inspiring. Thank you for keeping the flame alive during a dark and dreary winter. You drew me back.
Sometimes it only takes a word or two, but you guys built a bonfire, and you know how I like a good bonfire.
Wax- Your musical visions are bad to the bone.
Back- Bring it on.
Sven-I knew you could write it right.
You guys have a depth of understanding that allows the love of John to burn bright.
Share it.
Come on baby light my fire
S
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"It does not have to end like that, if only someone had the guts to finish what they started, be it HBO, Milch, or writers of Further Days of JFC. The first fairy tales were told at the fire in the cave. They became myths, legends and
prayers."
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Linc Stark abandoned scheduled surfing competition in Huntington Beach.
End of story?
http://beach.freedomblogging.com/2008/04/09/hb-surf-series-in-trouble-says-deffenbaugh/
The long-running HB Pro/Am Surf Series is in financial trouble and has canceled its first event.
Just a few weeks out from its season opener, owner and former World Tour surfer Jeff Deffenbaugh of Huntington Beach sent word out that not only was the event canceled, but the entire season is in doubt due to lack of sponsorship.
Its the old problem for surfing contests and this year, things are tough all over. But Deffenbaugh is not calling it quits just yet and is currently entertaining all offers for new deals.
Deffenbaughs message read:
Hello everyone,
I just wanted to inform you that the first event in May has been canceled and the whole season is on hold until we secure the sponsorship needed to run quality events.
A big THANKS goes out to ALL of you for supporting us over the years and could not have had such great success without your backing!
Thanks so much and keep surfing,
Jeff D.
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Mar 12, 2008 10:45 AM
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Vietnam Joe drives alone on a dark road. The sound of static fills the car as the camera pans to the radio knobs and then up to his face where there are the remnants of tears.
His glazed eyes lead to a flashback scene where he is walking through the jungle at night - every sound is magnified. He is afraid. The sound of a twig snap causes him to turn quickly - only to see his friend freezing in fear after causing the sound. They both stand motionless, listening. A single gun shot fires, breaking the silence, and his friend falls violently to the ground. Joe doesn't move. Slowly he looks down to the ground until he sees his own boots. Suddenly, all hell breaks loose. Gun fire erupts and grenades explode. In the confusion, he drops to the ground and covers his head. Peering up amidst the chaos, he sees the open eyes of his fallen friend - he is dead.
The visions of gunfire and explosions fade into the flashing lights of a police vehicle in his rear view mirror. Coming to his senses he shakes his head and rubs his eyes.
Now from the side of the road we see his van pull to the side and the border patrol truck pull up behind him. There is a long moment where nothing happens. Joe is checking his rear view mirror for movement.
"PLEASE STEP OUT OF YOUR VEHICLE"
Joe's door opens and as his foot touches the ground the megaphone voice directs him to "LAY DOWN ON THE GROUND"
Joe slowly lays down, face first on the ground. As boots approach his face he stares at them. Looking up he sees an agent pointing a rifle at him.
Joe exclaims: "Check the God damn van, asshole".
From a distance we see another agent standing with the back van doors open.
"All clear" exclaims the agent.
"No pick ups for you tonight" says the voice behind the rifle.
Joe: "Not pickin up, taking back, which should make everyone fucking happy. "
As the flashing lights fill the darkness of the dirt road ...the music begins:
Click here for music for the credits
Role credits.
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Great imagery Wax.
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Click and minimize
(We see Freddie walking along the boulevard ? sunglasses on)
Well I never been to Spain
But I kinda like the music
Say the ladies are insane there
And they sure know how to use it
(Scene changes to Cissy standing at the counter of the surf shop)
They don't abuse it
Never gonna lose it
I can't refuse it
(Mitch appears from behind her zipping his pants)
Well I never been to England
(Barry lies in his hospital bed starring at the ceiling)
But I kinda like the Beatles
Well, I headed for Las Vegas
Only made it out to Needles
(as the camera pans down we see Barry press a button on a morphine pump)
Can you feel it
must be real it
Feels so good
(The camera panned back up to a close up of Barry?s face feeing relief)
Oh, feels so good
Well I never been to Heaven (Now we flash to John walking on the beach with Cass filming him)
But I been to Oklahoma
Well they tell me I was born there
But I really don't remember (Cass kneels and films him approaching the camera as though he is narrating a documentary but he is not saying anything - just motioning his hands as though in conversation)
In Oklahoma, not Arizona
What does it matter
What does it matter (Close-up on John's eyes)
During the music we see scenes of the crew (including Linc, Tina and Jake) setting up for the surf competition. The good doctor looks on while sitting on his bike.
Whoa, I never been to Spain (Ramon stand behind his grill, aprin on.)
But I kinda like the music
Say the ladies are insane there (Ramon stops cooking, places his hand on the grill sinks his head and begins to weep)
And they sure know how to use it
They don't abuse it
Never gonna lose it
I can't refuse it
Well I never been to Heaven (Butchie and Shaun sit together at an outdoor table eating hot dogs and fries. Butchie is talking as though he is recounting stories of his past surfing adventures to Shaun)
But I been to Oklahoma
Well they tell me I was born there (Shaun sits back, smiles and looks up at the sky - feeling the warmth of the sun on his face)
But I really don't remember
In Oklahoma, not Arizona (Scene is now of Bill, sitting on his couch wearing a shoulder holster, a hand gun sits on the couch next to him)
What does it matter
What does it matter (Bill stands up - resolved- picks up the gun and places into the holster. He puts on his sports coat and walks with purpose to the door.
As the song fades, we are left with the vision of the door closing behind Bill, and the sunlight shining in from the window)
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Re: Episode 15: His Visit: Day Fourteen
Feb 2, 2008 9:16 PM
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Welcome to the board, Higgsfield. Stop and say hello.
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